Post by Maria on Apr 15, 2007 11:36:50 GMT 10
Name:Maria Danion
Age:16
Gender:female
Species:human
Appearance:Maria had blond near whiteish hair that it very straight, it is shoulder length and normally let free against her back. Maria has blue eyes that capture the attention of anyone that looks upon her as just another girl. Maria normally wears jeans and a t-shirt, her clothes are not revealing as most teens are they are just normal clothes. She is an average weight and hight. She is slim yet muscular .
Personality:Maria is a happy go lucky girl though her past suggests other wise. She loves animals and books and a decent party when one is announced. She is very protective of herself and her past she barley tells anyone what it was or what it was like.
History:Maria was the eldest of children and was born in to a fighting family. Her mother and father alway fought not one night went past without at least one fight happening. Maria grew accustomed to it and normally hid in a closet when they fought but soon her little brother was born and she had to fit two into her closet to hide from there parents. One afternoon it wasn't an unusual day Maria's parents where fighting but today Maria was kept out to watch her parents fight and her little brother locked in a cupboard. Maria watched as her father shot her mother first then her little brother as he went to help her. Soon Maria was let in an orphanage and was adopted by kind people who cared and loved for her and bought her her first horse then she was sent back to the orphanage. Maria escaped from the orphanage after her gelding died and wandered on the road until she reached where she is now.
Example post:
Maria stood still watching her mother and father fight. She watched as a vase hit the ground and shatter small shards hitting her bare feet. She was young but smart enough to know this was the end, the end of her mother and father, the end of her life of piece and harmony even though she couldn't truly say it was that. She heard a sharp bang on the wooden frame of one of the cupboards. Maria turned to it and cringed it was where her little brother was being kept locked away in a small cupboard to keep safe from the fighting, but Maria she had to sit out and watch the painful realization that was coursing through her mind. Her mother and father where done. Maria stood and moved toward the cupboard and opened it her little brother tumbled out. Tears where streaming down his pudgy face. He wept into Maria's feet and Maria straightened him and held him closely. Maria was planing to fight against her parents she had enough of only being able to watch. She turned as she heard her mother scream then a loud bang of a pistol. Maria screamed as did her little brother. Some how Maria wasn't surprised she knew it was going to happen some how she knew one of her parents wasn't going to be living at the end of this final fight, her little brother though ran to there mother. Maria didn't dare look she turned as she heard the pistol be cocked and another loud sharp painful bang of the pistol. Maria couldn't turn it was to painful she wouldn't look at her mother and brother sprawled out on the floor both bodies white like the first snow fall and there eyes showing shock but the painful sense of death. Maria felt a hard hand shake her. Her eyes snapped open she looked up to see the orphan keeper shaking her. "You where dreaming again dear" she said then she turned and walked away. Maria looked at the clock and rubbed her eyes. 'A nightmare of the past' she thought to herself then pulled back the cover and got out of her bed. Maria's blond hair fell against her nightshirt as she straighten herself. Everyone else was still sleeping so she quietly trudged out of the house and to the barns. Her last adoptive parents bought her a horse and they let her keep him when she was told she was to be adopted by another family so she still owned her gelding and she hugged him tightly as she saw him. Tears where stinging Maria's eyes and she let them go into her geldings chestnut mane. Sunny turned his head and looked at the weeping Maria. He nosed her gently then went back to eating his hay silently. When Maria had finished weeping she dried her blue eyes then smiled at her gelding. "Sunny your the only one I can talk to" Maria said before she started running over her geldings coat sighing softly.
Age:16
Gender:female
Species:human
Appearance:Maria had blond near whiteish hair that it very straight, it is shoulder length and normally let free against her back. Maria has blue eyes that capture the attention of anyone that looks upon her as just another girl. Maria normally wears jeans and a t-shirt, her clothes are not revealing as most teens are they are just normal clothes. She is an average weight and hight. She is slim yet muscular .
Personality:Maria is a happy go lucky girl though her past suggests other wise. She loves animals and books and a decent party when one is announced. She is very protective of herself and her past she barley tells anyone what it was or what it was like.
History:Maria was the eldest of children and was born in to a fighting family. Her mother and father alway fought not one night went past without at least one fight happening. Maria grew accustomed to it and normally hid in a closet when they fought but soon her little brother was born and she had to fit two into her closet to hide from there parents. One afternoon it wasn't an unusual day Maria's parents where fighting but today Maria was kept out to watch her parents fight and her little brother locked in a cupboard. Maria watched as her father shot her mother first then her little brother as he went to help her. Soon Maria was let in an orphanage and was adopted by kind people who cared and loved for her and bought her her first horse then she was sent back to the orphanage. Maria escaped from the orphanage after her gelding died and wandered on the road until she reached where she is now.
Example post:
Maria stood still watching her mother and father fight. She watched as a vase hit the ground and shatter small shards hitting her bare feet. She was young but smart enough to know this was the end, the end of her mother and father, the end of her life of piece and harmony even though she couldn't truly say it was that. She heard a sharp bang on the wooden frame of one of the cupboards. Maria turned to it and cringed it was where her little brother was being kept locked away in a small cupboard to keep safe from the fighting, but Maria she had to sit out and watch the painful realization that was coursing through her mind. Her mother and father where done. Maria stood and moved toward the cupboard and opened it her little brother tumbled out. Tears where streaming down his pudgy face. He wept into Maria's feet and Maria straightened him and held him closely. Maria was planing to fight against her parents she had enough of only being able to watch. She turned as she heard her mother scream then a loud bang of a pistol. Maria screamed as did her little brother. Some how Maria wasn't surprised she knew it was going to happen some how she knew one of her parents wasn't going to be living at the end of this final fight, her little brother though ran to there mother. Maria didn't dare look she turned as she heard the pistol be cocked and another loud sharp painful bang of the pistol. Maria couldn't turn it was to painful she wouldn't look at her mother and brother sprawled out on the floor both bodies white like the first snow fall and there eyes showing shock but the painful sense of death. Maria felt a hard hand shake her. Her eyes snapped open she looked up to see the orphan keeper shaking her. "You where dreaming again dear" she said then she turned and walked away. Maria looked at the clock and rubbed her eyes. 'A nightmare of the past' she thought to herself then pulled back the cover and got out of her bed. Maria's blond hair fell against her nightshirt as she straighten herself. Everyone else was still sleeping so she quietly trudged out of the house and to the barns. Her last adoptive parents bought her a horse and they let her keep him when she was told she was to be adopted by another family so she still owned her gelding and she hugged him tightly as she saw him. Tears where stinging Maria's eyes and she let them go into her geldings chestnut mane. Sunny turned his head and looked at the weeping Maria. He nosed her gently then went back to eating his hay silently. When Maria had finished weeping she dried her blue eyes then smiled at her gelding. "Sunny your the only one I can talk to" Maria said before she started running over her geldings coat sighing softly.